Spaghetti Poodle

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Apr/09
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Flying Spaghetti Monster my poem?

Does anyone like him? I was born in a factory, but could not fly They said I was satisfactory and put me in a box to buy. The ride was bumpy every time I went to that box was so hot and dark I started angerly vent. They threw me in a pot and it started to hurt I flew in a powerful thrust. I saw the guy standing next to two poodles and I flew in the sky and hit him with my wet noodle. So if you see me .. you better, I fly freely while attention son!

It is brilliant. Although "angerly" is spelled. "Wrath" The only party ERK is me: "They threw me in a pot and it started to hurt I was in a powerful thrust. "It does not flow with the rest of the poem. Maybe if you put a verse before he or she has changed a bit.

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